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Everybody has a day where things are fairly good then something happens; that ultimate embarrassment and they think that they will never be able get over it. The truth of the matter is that people do get over those embarrassing moments and look back on them and laugh because it was truly funny and it doesn't affect them anymore. Just like anyone else I've had a few embarrassing moments in my short lifetime so far. Having to look back on all of the embarrassing things that have happen to me; I would have to say my most embarrassing moment was in the mall with my friend and that mannequin fell on me. I too thought that I would never be able to get over the fact that I was embarrassed in the mall surrounded by a bunch of my peers. One day my friend and I where getting ready to go out of town; to Houston, Texas where we would be attending a Southern Football game. We where so excited about leaving because it was the only time that we actual go somewhere without our parents always around us. While packing our things we decided that we need a new outfit and a new pair of shoes. First we made sure to finish packing all the small; but necessary items like toothbrush, comb, toothpaste, and comb. Then we borrowed my sister car to go hunting for I new outfits and shoes. Our first stop was Gonzales to this little strip mall that we like to shop at; but we didn't have any luck finding what we were looking for that day. So we made our way to Cortana mall and look around in a few stores; my friend found some shoes that she purchased and I have found a shirt that I purchased. After leaving Cortana my friend still needed an outfit and I need to complete my outfit and get some shoes. We took a break from shopping and got some lunch to eat. Then we then decided to go to the Mall of Louisiana to continuing looking for our new things. Upon arrive at the Mall of Louisiana we stopped a Dillard's to check out there selection of shoe; leaving Dillard's we saw these two amazing looking guys. We decided to follow them to get a better look; us trying to follow them with out it being obvious. They stopped in this urban wear store where they where looking at so throwback jerseys. We were acting like we were looking at the throwback dresses next to the men's jerseys that they were looking at. I looked away for a minute; to look at the dress my friend had in her hand and they were gone. My friend turned around to look in the mirror and bumped the mannequin; it fell right on me and I fell to the ground. The two guys were standing behind us and started cracking up laughing. The salesperson in the store helped me up and fixed the mannequin back the way it was suppose to be. I was so embarrassing will never go to the mall with her again.
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An Embarrassing Moment

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              Everybody has a day where things are fairly good then something happens; that ultimate embarrassment and they think that they will never be able get over it. The truth of the matter is that people do get over those embarrassing moments and look back on them and laugh because it was truly funny and it doesn't affect them anymore. Just like anyone else I've had a few embarrassing moments in my short lifetime so far. Having to look back on all of the embarrassing things that have happen to me; I would have to say my most embarrassing moment was in the mall with my friend and that mannequin fell on me. I too thought that I would never be able to get over the fact that I was embarrassed in the mall surrounded by a bunch of my peers.
             
              One day my friend and I where getting ready to go out of town; to Houston, Texas where we would be attending a Southern Football game. We where so excited about leaving because it was the only time that we actual go somewhere without our parents always around us. While packing our things we decided that we need a new outfit and a new pair of shoes. First we made sure to finish packing all the small; but necessary items like toothbrush, comb, toothpaste, and comb. Then we borrowed my sister car to go hunting for I new outfits and shoes.
             
              Our first stop was Gonzales to this little strip mall that we like to shop at; but we didn't have any luck finding what we were looking for that day. So we made our way to Cortana mall and look around in a few stores; my friend found some shoes that she purchased and I have found a shirt that I purchased. After leaving Cortana my friend still needed an outfit and I need to complete my outfit and get some shoes. We took a break from shopping and got some lunch to eat. Then we then decided to go to the Mall of Louisiana to continuing looking for our new things.
             
              Upon arrive at the Mall of Louisiana we stopped a Dillard's to check out there selection of shoe; leaving Dillard's we saw these two amazing looking guys. We decided to follow them to get a better look; us trying to follow them with out it being obvious. They stopped in this urban wear store where they where looking at so throwback jerseys. We were acting like we were looking at the throwback dresses next to the men's jerseys that they were looking at. I looked away for a minute; to look at the dress my friend had in her hand and they were gone. My friend turned around to look in the mirror and bumped the mannequin; it fell right on me and I fell to the ground. The two guys were standing behind us and started cracking up laughing.
             
              The salesperson in the store helped me up and fixed the mannequin back the way it was suppose to be. I was so embarrassing will never go to the mall with her again.
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